My tutor's feedback:
https://db.tt/S20EUtg4
My reflections: https://db.tt/aDLJXcnr
Based on my tutor's feedback I have made some changes to my originally submission images (and created some photographic triptychs!).
I cropped the image below to get closer to my subject and converted it into black and white
No changes were made to this image
I converted this image into black and white.
No changes were made to this image
I cropped this image to get closer to the subject and covered the photo into black and white
I converted this image into black and white
https://db.tt/S20EUtg4
My reflections: https://db.tt/aDLJXcnr
Based on my tutor's feedback I have made some changes to my originally submission images (and created some photographic triptychs!).
I am including the set of adjusted images below.
Overall adjustments made:
The entire collection is now Black and White;
I removed the Image 6 of the origami 'Senzasuru' as it was weakening the set of images;
Individual image adjustments are described above each photo.
This image was converted into black and white
I cropped the image below to get closer to my subject and converted it into black and white
No changes were made to this image
I converted this image into black and white.
No changes were made to this image
I cropped this image to get closer to the subject and covered the photo into black and white
I converted this image into black and white
I converted this image into black and white
