People and Place Final Assignment: Feedback from tutor and my reflections

My tutor's report:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/yj6pqncwx0twdqt/2AnnaAllen507277-AS05.pdf?dl=0


My reflections on the tutor's feedback:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/zrgzvlc2civbgjf/3Assignment5%20Feedback%20to%20tutor.pdf?dl=0


Based on my tutor's feedback I made some adjustments to these images:

Adjusted tonal range
Tighter crop as advised by tutor

Adjusted tonal range

Adjusted tonal range and composition